、全文清新秀逸,亲切委婉,朴素而不落俗淘,值得借见。
2、文章杂而不乱,能做到详略得当,重点突出。
3、文章的结构简洁合理,作者对原文的理解也十分深刻透彻。全文语言铿锵有力,掷地有声,读来令人热血沸腾,心潮澎湃。
4、文章有详有略,言之有序,内容生动具体,不失为一篇佳作。
5、文章按事情发展的顺序,记叙了…的事,语言比较流畅,层次较清楚,自始自终显得其乐融融。
6、全文可圈可点的佳句不少,给文章增添了些文学情趣。
7、全文叙事集中,不枝不蔓,语言朴实流畅,感情真挚感人。
8、文章内容新颖,结构合理,流畅连贯,自然通达。
9、文章融情于景,边绘景边抒情,善于运用打比方的手法,使文章生动具体
内容来源于生活,因此语言虽然不怎样优美,但却真实有趣,写得入情入理。
Dear Susan,
This Sunday is my birthday. I’ll have a birthday at my home. It starts at 6p.m. Would you like to come? I’ll ask some of my friends to come.
My home is on Bridge Street. You can take a No.6 or No.8 bus, and get off on Bridge Street. Go straight, and then turn right at the first crossing. You can see a post office on your left. My home is across from the post office. It is a red house. You won’t miss it.
Yours,
Li Lei
I have too many rules in my school.So I am very tired. I can't eat food in class,and I must listen to the teacher carefully. Because I have to learn many things from the teacher.I can't listen to music in class,and I have to keep every rule.I have to be quiet in classes. In Chinese classes,I can't drink water and in English classes I have to do some reading.Oh,I can't stand these rules,but nobody can broken them. After class,I can't fight with my classmate,and I can't run in the hallways.Oh,no!I can't talk loudly in the dining hall ,either. I can't take the wet umbrellas to the school library.I can't be late for school.I must wear a school uniform.I have to clean the classroom after school...... What can I do?
先配备一段优美的句子 ,然后点明你写的主题是什么
Myfavoriteanimalmyfavoriteanimalsaredogs,soIkeepawhitedog.ItissmartdogcalledTom.Itisveryfriendlytome.Iamgoodwithmydog.Itisverycuteandclever.Ilikemydogverymuch.Ifeeditlotsoffoodandtakeashowerforit.Itakeittoplayeveryday.Itusuallymakesmeveryhappy.Ireallylikedogsverymuch.
我的父亲是一位人民教师。他戴着一副眼镜,看着斯斯文文。
There are many ways to get around, such as walking, buses and private cars and bicycles.If you are close to home, you can ride a bicycle, if you are far away, you can go directly if you have a private car.
在同学交往时要注意,真诚对待同学,不能欺骗。热心帮助同学,同学的困难和帮助有有求必应。在学习上也要和同学互相帮助。同学不会的题也要认真讲解。
一般初一第一次月考的作文类型:记叙文。分析:考虑到初中要与小学接轨,所以通常情况下各个中学在初一年第一次月考中的作文类型是记叙文。这一类型的作文多考测的是学生写人记事的能力,所以作文在确定为记叙文后,一般不会在形式上做过多要求,多以命题或半命题作文为主,字数要求在600字左右,素材大多选择为家庭生活或学校生活的类型或自我介绍。示例:
1、请以“我在 ( )中得到快乐”为题,写一篇文章(可以写你的经历、感悟、认识或者是在学习、生活中快乐的事)。提示:(1)先将题目补充完整;再写一篇600字左右的作文。(2)以记叙为主可适当抒情、议论。
2、请以“崭新的生活”为题,自选角度,写出对刚刚进入初中生活的点滴感受。要求:1、字数:600字左右 2、书写工整,语句通顺,勿写错别字3、记叙为主,有事例,有真情实感。
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