人文景观作文评语？

、全文清新秀逸，亲切委婉，朴素而不落俗淘，值得借见。

　　2、文章杂而不乱，能做到详略得当，重点突出。

　　3、文章的结构简洁合理，作者对原文的理解也十分深刻透彻。全文语言铿锵有力，掷地有声，读来令人热血沸腾，心潮澎湃。

　　4、文章有详有略，言之有序，内容生动具体，不失为一篇佳作。

　　5、文章按事情发展的顺序，记叙了…的事，语言比较流畅，层次较清楚，自始自终显得其乐融融。

　　6、全文可圈可点的佳句不少，给文章增添了些文学情趣。

　　7、全文叙事集中，不枝不蔓，语言朴实流畅，感情真挚感人。

　　8、文章内容新颖，结构合理，流畅连贯，自然通达。

　　9、文章融情于景，边绘景边抒情，善于运用打比方的手法，使文章生动具体

changemybadhabits作文初一？

change my bad habits

In my life,there are a lot of bad habits.For example,smoking drinking and stay up too lete 熬夜）.

First, smoking costs a great deal of money. It wastes 200 billion dollars each year in the world. Second,smoking does harm to the health of smokers and even the people near them. About 3 million people die of diseases caused by smoking every year.

Second,drinking a lot while drving.It's easy to happen accidents.

Staying up (too late)means(equals)committing suicide

healthyfoodvsjunkfood初一作文？

题目是：健康食品和垃圾食品的比较

那么可以从食品分类开始。

首先，什么样的定义为健康食品 什么样的为垃圾食品

然后，说明两者的差别 以及对食两种不同食品的影响进行说明 .

做后给大家一个建议 如何选择实物

In the zoo初一作文？

There are five zebras in the zoo.

动物园里有五只斑马。

I saw two bird in the zoo.

在动物园我看见了两只小鸟。

I saw two small camels in thezoo.

在动物园我看见了两只小骆驼。

I see a zebra in the zoo.

我在动物园里看到一只斑马。

How many foxes are there inthe zoo?

这座动物园里有几只狐狸？

The parrots in the zoo are very cute.

动物园里的鹦鹉非常可爱。

There are lots of monkeys in thezoo.

动物园里有很多猴子。

happybirthdayparty作文初一？

                My birthday party

　　Today is my birthday,so I am very happy.My mother makes a big and nice cake for me.My father gives me a hairy doll as my birthday present.My brothers and sisters are watching comic strips(漫画).I am playing badminton(羽毛球)with my classmate.I received a lot of presents,and we are all happy today.

登泰山记作文写了哪些人文景观？

人文景观：岱祠，碧霞元君祠，皇帝行宫，道中石刻。

附：原文

亭西有岱祠，又有碧霞元君祠。皇帝行宫，在碧霞元君祠东。是日，观道中石刻，自唐显庆以来，其远古刻尽漫失。僻不当道，皆不及往。

文章的顺序是：【总写泰山的位置，记述登山的过程，山顶看日出，返回记建筑和观石刻，补记自然景观】

how to be healthy 作文初一？

First, you should get up early and have breakfast every morning.

首先你应该早起,每天吃早饭。

Second, you should do sports for an hour in the daytime.

其次每天做一小时运动

Third, you should go to bed early. don't stay up too late

第三每天早睡,不要熬夜

mymothersday英语作文初一？

On mother's day I often help my mother with housework. This year I did the same. And I bought a gift for my mother. She was very happy. And she bought a lot of vegetables and meat. We had a big meal. And my father cooked the meal. We were happy.

myuniversitylife英语作文初一？

My First Year at College ——We will never forget our freshman year at college. In general it is a time filled with anticipation, some anxiety, and wonderful discoveries. ——College is much different than high school. You may decide to commute from your home to a local campus. What can we expect as we head off into the wonderful world of higher education? ——On some of those long, seemingly endless nights of studying and writing, it will be very natural for me to long for fine old days. Hang in there. These down periods will pass. ——I have made a lot of new friends. I am sure college friendships will be among the most satisfying and long-term in my life. It's always exciting to discover how wonderfully diverse college relationships can be. ——I am enjoying my newfound freedom. Stay up until dawn talking about my ideals and ambitions with my dorm's regular bull session buddies. Sleep in until the afternoon on a light class day. ——I even start to think about my future. Going to college is as much about finding out who am I as it is about getting the degree. 改这样行了吧？不行再发消息给我。

a trip to space作文初一？

space tourism is based on the ideal people to travel into space, into space to travel, giving an unprecedented experience to provide the latest and most surprising is that it can stimulate the person watching the space charming scenery, but also can enjoy the taste of weightlessness.

both of which experience can be enjoyed only in space, we can say that only the sky cijing. space travel project started in april 30, 2001. the first space tourists, american businessman dennis tito, the second space tourist to the south african millionaire mark - shuttleworth, the third space tourist gregory olsen, an american.

experts say the future of space tourism will show a mass, project diversification, companies competition and improve the four major trends in safety regulations