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Last sunday, Mr.Lee got up very early to go fishing. He spent the whole day sitting beside the river but got nothing at the end of the day. Therefore, Mr.Lee was very dissapointed due to that he had to go home by dinner time. On his way home, Lee thought that his wife might be mad at him for bringing nothing back. So he bought a big fish at the market before he got home. At least, he was happy finally for what he could bring home.
人文景观:岱祠,碧霞元君祠,皇帝行宫,道中石刻。
附:原文
亭西有岱祠,又有碧霞元君祠。皇帝行宫,在碧霞元君祠东。是日,观道中石刻,自唐显庆以来,其远古刻尽漫失。僻不当道,皆不及往。
文章的顺序是:【总写泰山的位置,记述登山的过程,山顶看日出,返回记建筑和观石刻,补记自然景观】
As the saying goes, you don’t know what happiness is until you lose it’ you don’t know what health is until you are ill. “Health is of vital importance to life” sounds like a cliche to everyone, but it is absolutely true.
The negligence of the delicate balance of your body and soul, the harmful habits such as smoking, excessive drinking and burning mid-night oil will catch up with you someday. How many big plans are interrupted by bad health! Even a normal life is unimaginable without the guarantee of health.
How to keep fit is an eternal topic of diversity and controversy. Regardless of all the different suggestions poured from all kinds of sources, one should do at least two things for him/herself. First, hold an active and optimistic attitude toward life and maintain a mental well-being. Second, live a regular life and keep a balanced diet. Anyway, a healthy life is within reach when you begin to adjust your mind and body.
English is an important subject in school. English is playiny an important role in our daily life.For example,all kinds of things are intruduced in English. And we must studyEnglish hard. In this way, we can understand the intruductions .Come on!
经常备记课文单词语法,同学之间彼此口语交流,同时看看英语课文书籍等等
English is very important .We had better learn English well .
首先用英语对我爱英语的喜爱之情进行概述,其次用英语对我为什么喜爱英语及英语带给我的好处进行详细描述,最后对我爱英语的主要内容进行综合评价
English is currently the most wide spread language in the world, it is second only to Mandarin Chinese in terms of the amount of people which speak it.
English can be used as a lunguage in any part of the world, though the the people might not have the same accents, still, the language will be understandable. There are various examples in proving the importance of english.
For instance, in a travel, when a person travels to another part of the world either for business or as a tourist, the languages may differ. In these conditions, English becomes th e language that helps people to deal with the condition.
The presence of English as an universal language assumes importance in the fact that more and more people leave their country for studying abroad. Education has increased the role of English and also reinforces the fact that English is very important
Hello,everybody,welcometoourEnglishevening!Todayisspecialoneandwearesohonortogettogether!Beforeourstarting,pleaseallowtototalkaboutsomething.Thereare26boysand24girlsinourclass.Well,wereadEnglishnewspapers,talkstoriesinEnlish,listenEnglishbroadcastinginoursparetime.Formypart,wecanenrichourEnglishintheseactivities.Allright,let'sgettothepoint,wehavesomeprogramstonight,suchasoperas,singing,dancingandsoon.Hopeyouenjoyit.(我就是主持过这类的活动,我写的你就参考一下吧)